Time to put some words on ether 🙂
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Here is my updated Prologue. I appreciate all your comments. Positive or Negative. If you like it, say so. If you hate it, say so. If you have any thoughts , feel free to leave me a comment. This is work in progress and not corrected for grammar and punctuation. I first posted my working prologue here.
Here is the updated prologue. Thanks for your feedback.
There was no escape.
Sweat ran down my face in rivulets. My throat was parched. I screamed! But heard nothing.
My arms ached. My legs ached. It was the most uncomfortable position to be in. Trussed up, hands tied behind my back to my ankles, bent over backwards, and blindfolded with tape over my mouth. My head felt heavy and painful. As though I had smacked my head over and over again, against some hard object…
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